Thorny Beauty

Thorny beauty
catches your eye
blinding you–temporarily
to the greenhouse roses
without bouquet.

Rough bark,
strong stem,
thorns a dagger’s envy,
lush green thickness,
scent intoxicating,

all so unnerving,
you won’t notice,
the gentle blossoms
—pink—
amongst the complex vitality.

Standing tall within her beauty,
she remains innocent
to your feeble blight,
absorbed in the joy
of warmth and sunlight.

A response poem to “She Was The Storm” by Cherie Avritt I saw in a review by Rachel 0ates.

Good old times

vintage dreams
of white fenced suburbs
pastels everywhere
in the garden
on the walls
vanilla life

suffocating nightmare
of monotony
the neighbour’s dog barked too loudly
you have no where to go
no where to be

you are lost
somewhere in your half-acre plot